This post marks the first of 8 in which we’ll look at the Cluetrain Manifesto chapter by chapter. Read the Intro and Preface, along with Lindsay’s post below. Then chime in on the conversation as often as you’d like. Comments will close on Sunday, Feb. 23. This discussion is for the graduate students in the class, but others are free to join in.
by Lindsay Kuntzman
The Cluetrain Manifesto: Preface, Foreword, Manifesto, and Introduction
The Internet has had a tremendous impact on society: individuals all over the globe can talk with one another, companies can sell their products, news can be shared, and more. The change that the Internet has brought can be seen particularly in business. The preface, foreword, manifesto, and introduction to the book, The Cluetrain Manifesto, all share two themes — the theme of people changing how business works and the theme of humanizing the voice of business.
As individuals we all have various interests. One look around Internet chat rooms, message boards, and discussion forums should reveal those differences. As a result of those differing interests, we cannot be grouped together as consumers in one mass market. Instead, niche markets or “micromarkets” have developed with the Internet increasing their development. With this growth of niche markets on the Internet, old marketing methods will not work to reach consumers.
The techniques that businesses once used for selling and marketing their products are no longer as effective with the Internet. As David Weinberger wrote for his section of the preface, “We’re not on the Web primarily to shop, to be marketed to, to receive business ‘messages,’ or to download missives from the HR Department. We’re there to invent a new world” (p. xii). For businesses, joining that new world might entail some adjustments — the typical “top-down” communication from corporate will no longer work. Instead, everyone, both outside and inside the company, has the ability to join and influence the conversation. As it was stated in the preface by Christopher Locke, “…the web has not brought… passive couch-potato consumers” (p. x).
With the Internet, individuals will no longer passively receive messages; instead, they will enter conversations. In Rick Levine’s section of the preface, he wrote, “…people talk to each other about businesses, wax enthusiastic about their loves and hates, and businesses ignore those conversations at their peril” (p. xiii). Businesses must enter the conversation — simply communicating in an asymmetrical manner and disseminating information can be detrimental. The easiest way for an organization to enter the conversation is to begin speaking in a human voice.
Too often companies use “corporate-speak” when talking with people. As the beginning of the manifesto states, “Most corporations…know how to talk…of the mission statement, marketing brochure, and your-call-is-important-to-us busy signal” (p. xxi). But in order for companies to communicate in a human voice, it will be necessary to allow real individuals to speak for them. Businesses already have individual employees who have the ability to enter the marketplace of conversations — however, many businesses appear more comfortable putting forth their corporate messages.
In the introduction it is stated that the Internet resembles old-world bazaars. It is a place where people can go to interact with one another and hear the human voice (p. xxxi). The human voice heard around the Internet is “in sharp contrast to the…homogenized broadcast media, sterilized mass ‘culture,’ and the enforced anonymity of bureaucratic organizations” (p. xxxi). Organizations not willing to communicate in their human voices will find it difficult to connect with their key publics.
Although the Internet has changed business, it is not ìthe end of commerceî (p. xxxii). Instead, it is a chance for organizations to change and integrate themselves as a part of a consumer’s life. With regards to the two themes that emerged from these sections of the book, that humans are changing how businesses operate, and businesses must learn to speak in a human voice, I would like to pose three questions:
First, number 74 of the 95 theses is that, “We are immune to advertising. Just forget it” (p. xxvii). If we believe we are immune to advertising, will all advertising-dependent media (such as radio, magazines, broadcast television, etc.) become extinct one day?
Second, a part of number 93 of the 95 theses is, “We’re both inside companies and outside them. The boundaries that separate our conversations look like the Berlin Wall today, but theyíre really just an annoyance. We know they’re coming downî (p. xxviii). With global competition, proprietary information, and the high cost of research development, how can the ‘wall’ between conversations ever come down completely?”
Finally, how can public relations practitioners help companies learn to speak in a human voice?


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February 18, 2008 at 8:57 am
Bill Sledzik
Good start, Lindsay. The authors of Cluetrain are urging businesses to engage their audiences sincerely and honestly, and to let the conversations occur in the free-flowing, online environment. This includes allowing (even inviting) employees and critics into the discussion. It includes an open discussion of our strengths and weaknesses, and thus it requires a “transparency” that most in American businesses are unaccustomed to practicing.
Does the unwillingness of business to relinquish “control” of the message make the Cluetrain Manifesto more of a pipe dream? How would your boss or client react if the first 10 blog posts were critical of him and the company he built?
February 18, 2008 at 11:08 am
lindsayk
Thanks, Bill. If I was the owner of a company and saw negative comments being posted on the Internet about my business I would be upset. After all, who wants to read hurtful comments? But, after reading those posts, I would want to devise a plan of action – maybe a policy needs changed or an unhappy customer needs an apology. This is where we, as public relations practitioners, could come in and provide counsel.
February 20, 2008 at 12:36 pm
msands
To your first question Lindsay, I believe that jaded “consumers” like Mr. Levine want to believe that we are all immune to advertising and that we’ve all evolved to a higher plane but that’s just not true, yet anyway. Although it takes more of an effort to be noticed through traditional advertising, it’s not dead yet. I don’t think advertising supported media will die because of the death of advertising. They have a lot of other troubles that will kill them first.
To the second question, I don’t think the wall will ever truly come down. There will always be a barrier of some sort. The best we can hope for is an open gate in the wall where people freely can come and go as they please but can be shut when need be. Corporations are naturally secretive and suspicious of outsiders and it going to take a lot of WIIFM to convince them being open is worth it.
It will be difficult for PR practitioners to get corporations to speak with a human voice. I think it will take persistence. Practitioners need to repeatedly show executives examples of corporate speak and human speak side by side and focus on why the latter is the best option. Bringing in examples of how other corporations have succeeded with adopting a human voice will help as well.
Lindsay, I would love to work for someone who devised a plan of action when they received negative comments. If you know of a place, let me know. In my experience, the higher up you get the more insulated you are and the more you absolutely don’t believe anything negative against you. My advice to executive America would be to walk a mile in your entry level employees’ shoes. We get negative (mostly unconstructive) feedback every day and suck it up, smile and figure out a way to incorporate it into our projects, like it or not. Unless this fundamental insulation is broken down, I think that the Cluetrain Manifest is little more than a pipe dream.
February 21, 2008 at 5:58 pm
psedon
I agree with Michelle that advertising is not dead, nor are we immune to it. I have heard that more people watch the Super Bowl for the ads than for the game itself. Advertising can be informative and fun — even entertaining. As consumers become more skilled in weeding out hype vs. fact, advertisers will out of necessity have to provide more valuable content in their ads and communicate more meaningfully in the marketplace. I don’t believe ad-supported media is ready to be written off yet either.
The Cluetrain authors want to tear down corporate firewalls, but just as government must of necessity deal with some issues behind closed doors (such as national secuirty issues), businesses must be afforded a degree of protection from the outside (such as competitors) as well. As those of us who took “Ethics” last semester learned, even the most well-managed companies in terms of openness and employee involvement were open only, by their descriptions, “as much as possible.”
As far as PR practitioners speaking with a more human voice, because they are on the front line, so to speak, it is vital to be comfortable with the mission of the organization itself. Taking ownership of something you truly believe in makes your communications more human, more real. And that’s where management must recognize its responsibility as well. Treating employees with respect and openness — allowing for more conversation between management and employees — allows employees to feel such an ownership-relationship with the organization.
February 22, 2008 at 3:07 pm
kzupan
The aspect of “humanizing” our current corporate business approach is fascinating. I was floored when the authors discussed Frederick Taylor’s theory of “scientific management” and Ford’s assembly-line revolution because I think the industrial age could be considered the time when all human voice was squashed and corporations started controlling the communication (as do the authors).
I don’t think all advertising-dependent media will become extinct one day because as the author’s state, human voice and communication drive the market. Businesses are run by people, and even if the corporation limits their communication, both internal and external, people always have something to say. We’re still in a capitalist society after all. Supply and demand is for the moment, here to stay and advertising is spurring the demand.
There will always be some sort of “wall” in a business between upper management and their employees, or else it might come pretty close to anarchy. What the Internet and World Wide Web have brought however, is more voice for management, more voice for the employees, and a louder (but possibly not a more manageable or controlled) voice for the organization’s brand or reputation. Who’s controlling the message now? The organization thinks it might be by having an interactive website, Intranet, blog, etc., but in reality, it’s the people “out there” that have the ability for control.
By speaking more in a “human” voice, I believe it not only draws more people to your organization, but it puts you in a more positive light. As the author explained, his organization started getting massive media pick-up and attention once he started chatting with the media and journalists in a friendly and agenda-free manner. People are weary after the multiple corporate scandals of a few years ago, so by being able to speak to a business in a friendly, conversational way, it separates your business from the others and helps build trust with employees and customers.
February 22, 2008 at 7:43 pm
ihrigmr
I believe in some ways we are immune to advertising. For instance, I rarely watch live television. I have a DVR and with my work schedule it is easier for me to record my shows and watch them at my convenience. With that said, I skip all the advertisements. However, I agree with Michelle and Patty that it isn’t dead, nor will it die anytime soon. There is still a need for some advertising. That’s where research will tell you what your audience wants and how they can be marketed to.
The idea of the Berlin Wall falling in the corporate world is a little hard to imagine. There will always be boundaries between the outside world and those on the inside. That’s not to say the companies can’t be receptive and open to the outside world. They should be paying attention to what’s going on outside their walls. But there are times when the doors should be closed.
Encouraging companies to speak in a human voice is where public relations practitioners can prove their worth to an organization. PR practitioners can do the research, as Michelle mentioned, and show the value of good communications. In addition, I believe speaking in a human voice is about accessibility and transparency, which starts with the ability to communicate on a level that the intended audience can understand. Organizations may not be too receptive to transparency, but once they understand that it doesn’t mean opening the floodgates to top-secret matters, they will see that transparency can have positive results. Accessibility means there is a constant voice or presence that people on the outside, as a well as those on the inside, can communicate with.
February 22, 2008 at 9:54 pm
lindsayk
It seems everyone is in agreement that the “wall” will never truly come down in the corporate world. As Patti stated, those of us who took “Ethics” learned even companies that are well-managed, open, and encourage employee involvement are only open to a certain degree. While I think companies do need to conduct some business in private, it is also important that there is as much transparency as possible. Companies that adopt a human voice should be able to become more transparent than organizations who continue their “corporate speak.”
February 24, 2008 at 2:53 pm
psedon
Lindsay, I think the Colorado brewery (and I can’t think of the name of the company at the moment!) came closest to this degree of transparency, and you could sense it from the comments of everyone involved with the brewery. For those who weren’t in “Ethics” last semester, the company achieved this sense of ownership among its associates with open and honest communications both within the company itself and with the community and market.
February 24, 2008 at 3:54 pm
msands
I agree with Lindsay that corporations who adopt a human voice over corporate speak will become the most transparent. To truly adapt a human voice it must be honest and I think transparency will naturally follow in this vain.
Patty, the company was the New Belgium Brewing Company and I agree they did a great job of becoming transparent with its public especially its employees by emphasizing employee empowerment.
February 24, 2008 at 5:19 pm
Bill Sledzik
I’m a bit late getting back to this conversation. Some observations:
Katy, you said:
“By speaking more in a ‘human’ voice, I believe it not only draws more people to your organization, but it puts you in a more positive light. As the author explained, his organization started getting massive media pick-up and attention once he started chatting with the media and journalists in a friendly and agenda-free manner.”
Interesting — and oh-so simple. I would encourage you to check out my post of 1/31/08 that tells of Tom Foremski’s wish for PR people to pitch him via Facebook. His message: Get to know me and our relationship (PR pro to media) has a better chance of working and being productive for both sides.
I see most of you resisting the notion that advertising has lost its effectiveness. While I respect your viewpoints, I tend to agree with the Cluetrain authors on this one. Just look at how the Internet has crippled the print news media. And consider the amount of information online to help us make objective decisions vs. ad-driven ones. This creates a whole new set of challenges for marketers and — in my mind — a whole new threat to democracy with the erosion of the traditional mainstream media.
In many ways, the walls around our corporations have already come down, even if the mavens of corporate America would rather not accept it. “Command and control” isn’t working anymore, and it likely never will again. For competitive reasons, some business will always be done in secret. But the good, the bad and the ugly about your company’s products and services will get a public airing in this online “conversation.” You can participate in that conversation or you can ignore it. It is NOT going away.
That’s the truism of Web 2.0: You can’t hide from it, nor should you.
All this discussion of breweries is making me kinda thirsty.
February 24, 2008 at 9:29 pm
eminno
To answer the question about the boundaries that separate our conversations, I will say that the internet is a place where separation of upper management and other employees remains. The web has become a place where everybody has a voice, and just because you’re a CEO doesn’t mean you can effectively manage the internet operations of your company. The website, advertising and public relations that take place on-line now require 24 hours a day seven days a week attention. Therefore, the “head honcho” will most likely delegate those operations to somebody else. This could make the upper management and the customers, or “everyday” people more separated than before.
As for Bill’s comment that the internet has decimated print media, I have to agree. Especially that this decimation is helping to destroy democracy. At its core, democracy rests on the free flow of discussion about unfiltered facts. Our current news sources have become somewhat of a dinner buffet. Whatever news you want to hear, it’s there for you.
As for public relations practitioners helping companies have more “human speak”, I think it comes down to honesty. As easy as that sounds, I’m sure it’s not natural for businesses to be especially candid. The web has allowed the everyday customer to dig for more information about practices, and procedures of companies than ever before, but major corporations are still good at masking what they don’t want the public to see. But people are flawed and I think are more receptive when companies admit they have flaws as well.
Just reading the “95 thesis” I’ve discovered that because its honest, conversational writing, it’s easy to read. So it kind of proves a point in itself. It’s relatable, which is exactly what the Cluetrain Manifesto points out. Conversations take place between humans, so make your business conversations human as well.
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